I recently wrote a poem after listening to an inspiring song. Please note that the song in the poem is mine, Breathe Me by Sia was simply inspiration. I'll probably put it up soon. Comment Pleaz...
Crying to the Beat By Tesslyn Bergin 4/16/08
Everyone's got their music on
Everyone's wasting time.
Dad's got the radio singing
Mom's dancing to the rhyme.
Sis is listening to a tragic song,
You can tell she's going to cry.
It truly is a sad story, really
Why she finds the lyrics so heart-wrenching.
It's about a man who's dying
Who's heart is losing beat
Who has a wife and child-to-be
A child he had hoped to meet.
His wife is sobbing in her hands,
Praying the doctors lie.
He tells her to be strong now
And to calm her sorrowful cry.
He tells her to love their soon-due child
And not to mourn for long.
He says "The sadness would hurt the baby,
So live on after I'm gone."
Then, in this tragic tale,
He reached out a shaking hand
And placed it on his lover's belly.
He told the unborn son to be a good boy
And always love his mommy.
Then he whispered a little tune
To his precious kin.
That song truly touched the women's core
Thus he sang his first and last,
Closed his eyes and sang
No more.
Everyone's got their music on,
Bopping to the songs.
Sis is crying hard now,
Cradling her baby in her arms.
She doesn't cry because she's sad,
She says at the song's end.
No, she cries because she's heard it before,
It's inflicted a wound too deep to mend.
She first heard it from her lover's lips,
As he was about to die.
When he had told her to be strong now,
And to calm her sorrowful cry.
Fin
Again, LET'S HERE A SHOUTOUT FROM THE WAMS STUDENTS!!!!

Devious Comments
I loved it! ^^
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After being tricked by Kyoraku- Taicho, you touch vice captain Nanao Ise's butt and with the side of her glasses, you died in red.
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Amat victoria curam
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If Ignorance is bliss....why is everyone so unhappy?
(friend) "what woul life be like without me adam?"
(me) "like a broke pencil...."
(friend) "how do you mean?"
(me) "pointless..."
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"Silence pierces the soul like a blunt sword forced through flesh"
"Frustration is just an 11 lettered word for FUCK!"
"You should consider suicide as the solution to all of MY problems"
- ME
-->:[link] <--
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Weve watched while the stars burned out,
And creation played in reverse.
The Universe freezing in half-light.
I adopted a Shunsui Kyouraku chibi from The-Den
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Human beings, who are almost unique in having the ability to learn from the experience of others, are also remarkable for their apparent disinclination to do so.
-[Douglas.Adams]-
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~Mati-Chan~
"I draw , therefore I am!"
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After being tricked by Kyoraku- Taicho, you touch vice captain Nanao Ise's butt and with the side of her glasses, you died in red.
NP friendo
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After being tricked by Kyoraku- Taicho, you touch vice captain Nanao Ise's butt and with the side of her glasses, you died in red.
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After being tricked by Kyoraku- Taicho, you touch vice captain Nanao Ise's butt and with the side of her glasses, you died in red.
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After being tricked by Kyoraku- Taicho, you touch vice captain Nanao Ise's butt and with the side of her glasses, you died in red.
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After being tricked by Kyoraku- Taicho, you touch vice captain Nanao Ise's butt and with the side of her glasses, you died in red.
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Human beings, who are almost unique in having the ability to learn from the experience of others, are also remarkable for their apparent disinclination to do so.
-[Douglas.Adams]-
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After being tricked by Kyoraku- Taicho, you touch vice captain Nanao Ise's butt and with the side of her glasses, you died in red.
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After being tricked by Kyoraku- Taicho, you touch vice captain Nanao Ise's butt and with the side of her glasses, you died in red.
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After being tricked by Kyoraku- Taicho, you touch vice captain Nanao Ise's butt and with the side of her glasses, you died in red.
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~Mati-Chan~
"I draw , therefore I am!"
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You need not leave your room.Remain sitting at your table and listen.You need not even listen,simply wait,just learn to become quiet,and still,and solitary.The world will freely offer itself to you to be unmasked.[...]it will roll in ecstasy at your feet.
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"All of us could take a lesson from the weather. It pays no attention to criticism." ~Unknown
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